Difference between revisions of "Talk:Do You Wish To See Us Appear?"
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*http://www.goodworksonearth.org/do_you_wish_that_we_show_up.html | *http://www.goodworksonearth.org/do_you_wish_that_we_show_up.html | ||
*http://www.luisprada.com/Protected/change_the_world.htm | *http://www.luisprada.com/Protected/change_the_world.htm | ||
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*http://www.rumormillnews.com/cgi-bin/archive.cgi/noframes/read/40313 | *http://www.rumormillnews.com/cgi-bin/archive.cgi/noframes/read/40313 | ||
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* missed and preserved certain typographical errors by Translator 'A' | * missed and preserved certain typographical errors by Translator 'A' | ||
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Latest revision as of 16:39, 25 September 2011
- Concordance of Texts 'A' and 'B'
- Concordance of Text 'B' and the New Translation
- Concordance of original French and the New Translation
Contents
Text sources
English translation 'A'
- http://www.goodworksonearth.org/do_you_wish_that_we_show_up.html
- http://www.luisprada.com/Protected/change_the_world.htm
- English text 'A' conforms topic by topic to the French source.
English translation 'B'
- http://www.rumormillnews.com/cgi-bin/archive.cgi/noframes/read/40313
- English text 'B' contains supplementary matter (probably amplifications by the translator) not in the French source.
Observations
Translator 'A'
- writes with British spelling
- is not a native speaker of English
- confused or misunderstood certain points that were understood and correctly translated by Translator 'B'
- adhered faithfully to the original French text
Translator 'B'
- writes with American spelling
- is an articulate near-native speaker of English (confused the transitive verb 'legitimize' as 'legitimate')
- missed and preserved certain typographical errors by Translator 'A'
- added certain amplifications to the original French text --some of which exceed the duty of faithful translation.
