Talk:Do You Wish To See Us Appear?

• Concordance of Texts 'A' and 'B'
• Concordance of Text 'B' and the New Translation
• Concordance of original French and the New Translation

Text sources

English translation 'A'

• http://www.goodworksonearth.org/do_you_wish_that_we_show_up.html
• http://www.luisprada.com/Protected/change_the_world.htm
• English text 'A' conforms topic by topic to the French source.

English translation 'B'

• http://www.rumormillnews.com/cgi-bin/archive.cgi/noframes/read/40313
• English text 'B' contains supplementary matter (probably amplifications by the translator) not in the French source.

Observations

Translator 'A'

• writes with British spelling
• is not a native speaker of English
• confused or misunderstood certain points that were understood and correctly translated by Translator 'B'
• adhered faithfully to the original French text

Translator 'B'

• writes with American spelling
• is an articulate near-native speaker of English (confused the transitive verb 'legitimize' as 'legitimate')
• missed and preserved certain typographical errors by Translator 'A'
• added certain amplifications to the original French text --some of which exceed the duty of faithful translation.